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【題目】假設(shè)你是某高中生李華.在學(xué)習(xí)了牛津高中英語模塊二第二單元 Reading An adventure in Africa 后，你班對主人公 Toby 是否有必要開展這樣的冒險(xiǎn)之旅進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)下表所 提供的信息給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況，并表達(dá)你的看法。

有必要	1、結(jié)識不同的人.經(jīng)歷不同的文化 2、拓寬視野，豐富知識 3、......	你的觀點(diǎn) ......(至少 2 點(diǎn))
沒必要	1、耗時(shí)費(fèi)錢 2、干擾野生動物生活，破壞生態(tài)自然環(huán)境 3、......

注意:1、對所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述.適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2、詞數(shù) 150 左右。信的開頭、結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3、作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

4.參考詞匯:horizons n.視野、眼界

Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've recently had about whether it is necessary for Toby to have an adventure travelling in Africa. We do have different opinions on this matter.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've recently had about whether it is necessary for Toby to have an adventure travelling in Africa. We do have different opinions on this matter.

Some students are in favor of it. With the adventure traveling, they will have more chances to meet completely different people and experience totally different cultures. Their horizons will be broadened, and their knowledge will be enriched. Most importantly, placing themselves in situations where things don’t always go as planned, adventure makes it possible for them to learn to deal with the uncertainties and meet the challenges, thus helping build their confidence.

However, others argue that adventure is nothing but a waste of time and money. The peace of nature and the animals living in the wild will be disturbed, causing awfully much damage to the environment. Worse still, it can sometimes be dangerous, costing people their precious lives.

Personally, adventure travelling does good not only to our health but also to our mind. Only if we make sure those advantages outweigh the disadvantages can we truly benefit from it. (150 words)

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。假設(shè)你是某高中生李華.在學(xué)習(xí)了牛津高中英語模塊二第二單元 Reading An adventure in Africa 后，你班對主人公 Toby 是否有必要開展這樣的冒險(xiǎn)之旅進(jìn)行了討論。請根據(jù)下表所 提供的信息給報(bào)社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況，并表達(dá)你的看法。寫作時(shí)首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用，同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一封書信，格式正確，要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)緊密，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。With the adventure traveling, they will have more chances to meet completely different people and experience totally different cultures.句中使用with的獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)；Their horizons will be broadened, and their knowledge will be enriched.句中使用一般將來時(shí)態(tài)的被動語態(tài)；placing themselves in situations where things don’t always go as planned,句中where引導(dǎo)定語從句；adventure makes it possible for them to learn to deal with the uncertainties and meet the challenges, thus helping build their confidence.句中it做形式賓語，同時(shí)現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語；Only if we make sure those advantages outweigh the disadvantages can we truly benefit from it.部分倒轉(zhuǎn)經(jīng)典運(yùn)用；另外，in favor of，Most importantly, However, Worse still, Personally,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。