Question

11．假定你是李華，你將參加校學(xué)生會(huì)組織的演講比賽，你想請(qǐng)你的英語(yǔ)老師去聽(tīng)你的演講．
請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．邀請(qǐng)老師的原因：你希望英語(yǔ)老師能給你一些建議；
2．比賽時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)：下周四下午2：30，校大禮堂；
3．演講比賽人數(shù)：12人．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．信的開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)．
4．參考詞匯：大禮堂auditorium
Dear Mr．Hu．
I'm Li Hua．      ．
Best wishes!
Yours．
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
And you know it is the first time for me to make such an important speech in public．
高分句型二：
There're 12 students who will compete in the contest，and I'm the only one in my class to attend．
句型一 you know it is the first time for me to make such…該句中有一個(gè)固定的用法：it is the first time for sb to do sth 對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)是第一次做某事
句型二 who will compete in the contest..該句是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，who在該句中作主語(yǔ)，替代前面的先行詞students

解答 Dear Mr．Hu，
   I'm Li Hua．I'm going to make a speech in a speech contest organized by the Students'Union．And you know it is the first time for me to make such an important speech in public．（高分句型一）So，I sincerely invite you to come to see my performance and give me some advice on my speech．（提出邀請(qǐng)）There're 12 students who will compete in the contest，and I'm the only one in my class to attend．（高分句型二）All of my classmates will come to cheer up for me．（描述演講情況）Would you come to the contest to be held at our school's auditorium at 2：30 next Thursday afternoon？I'm looking forward to seeing you there．
   Best wishes!
Yours，
 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書(shū)面表達(dá)為提綱類(lèi)，該類(lèi)作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫(xiě)作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語(yǔ)言將作文展示出來(lái)．