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【題目】假如你是李華。校英文報Growing pains欄目專門解答中學生的煩惱問題�，F(xiàn)欄目收到一封來信。請根據(jù)這封信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。

Dear Editor,

I am really angry with my parents recently. Next Sunday is my birthday. My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year. But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas, because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon. They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time. I believe I am old enough to control myself, but they don’t believe me. What’s more, they broke their promise!

Li Yan

內(nèi)容要求：

1.理解父母良苦用心；

2.手機有利有弊；

3.給出你的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好。

Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings. _______________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings. As a saying says, to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual. It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can. We should understand the good intentions of parents. They must have been for your own good. As a high school student, our studies are important and very heavy. There are many advantages of mobile phone, checking dictionaries, listening to music, checking information and so on. But there is also a lot of harm, such as improper use, indeed affect the study and life. We should try our best to study and make great progress.

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇作文是材料作文。

給出的情景是一個因父母曾承諾給孩子買手機，但孩子的父母擔心手機會影響學習，沒有兌現(xiàn)承諾。這使得孩子生氣，認為父母不信任自己，而且違背了諾言。

針對這種情況寫一封信。內(nèi)容包括：1.理解父母良苦用心； 2.手機有利有弊；3.給出你的建議。

亮點：本篇范文，要點齊全，理由充分。語言地道規(guī)范，語法結(jié)構(gòu)正確，簡明扼要。在寫作的過程中使用了多種句式，很好地體現(xiàn)駕馭英語的能力。使用的句式如下：

非限制性定語從句：As a saying says, to be appreciated as a parents is quite unusual.

主語從句：It is quit sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can。

表推測的句子：They must have been for your own good.

非謂語作狀語：There are many advantages of mobile phone, checking dictionaries, listening to music, checking information and so on.

But there is also a lot of harm, such as improper use, indeed affect the study and life.

I hope things will be better for you soon!

提出 建議的句子：

We should understand the good intentions of parents.

We should try our best to study and make great progress.