Question

閱讀下面短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

“When should I begin to acquire good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher.

“How old are you?” asked the teacher.

“Eight years old, sir.”answered the boy.

“Then you have just lost eight years,”the teacher replied.

There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.

Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one’s teeth in the morning, for instance, keeps one’s teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking one’s tongue out, biting one’s fingernails and picking one’s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being with us, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant.

It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age shape our character. Habits are like tributaries(支流) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person’s character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1. 以約30個詞概括本文內(nèi)容；

2. 以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓�好�?xí)慣養(yǎng)成的看法，并包括以下要點：

（1）你認(rèn)為好習(xí)慣重要嗎，為什么？

（2）你身上有哪些好習(xí)慣，它們對你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活有什么影響？

（3）怎樣才能養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣？

【寫作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

2. 作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.

I can’t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character, increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around you. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit.

As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didn’t dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.

Then how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep pushing yourself. It may take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給短文寫一篇150詞左右的短文。寫作內(nèi)容包括：以30個詞概括短文內(nèi)容；用120個詞談?wù)勀銓Α昂昧?xí)慣的養(yǎng)成”的看法。作文要點包括：為什么要養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣；好習(xí)慣對你的影響；怎樣養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣，至少介紹兩種方法。注意不能直接引用原文的句子，不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名。不要出現(xiàn)標(biāo)點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：

短文主要強調(diào)了好習(xí)慣的重要性，養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣不僅能夠?qū)θ粘Ｉ�活有幫助，還能塑造人的性格。

范文注意使用Therefore, As for me, In the past, however, Now, Then, First of all, never, Then, Last but not least等連接句子和段落，或者表示列舉，使作文語意連貫、條理清晰；

范文使用了條件句Once you make up your mind to do something；非謂語動詞believing that you can become a better person；強調(diào)句it is perseverance that makes you successful等語法知識，使作文的語法結(jié)構(gòu)多樣化，復(fù)雜句式的使用給作文增色很多；

范文使用了較多的固定短語和固定搭配：can’t agree more with, not only...but also, of great significance, benefit from...to, dare to, because of, Thanks to, am proud of, be determined to, fight against, give up等，使作文的內(nèi)容得到充實；

考點：材料類作文