【題目】假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，畢業(yè)后想去康奈爾大學(xué)（Cornell University）深造。請結(jié)合以下要點給康奈爾大學(xué)的負(fù)責(zé)人寫一封電子郵件，希望獲得獎學(xué)金。

1.自我介紹，包括英語水平、獨立生活的能力以及與人溝通的能力；

2.希望獲得獎學(xué)金；

3.希望得到答復(fù)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua._____________________________________________________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Hua. I’m writing in the hope of obtaining a scholarship in Comell University for the bachelor’s degree.

As a straight A student, I have a good command of both science and arts, especially English. I’ve passed TOEFL with an excellent score. Apart from my outstanding academic achievements, I take part in various after-class activities to improve my social skills and broaden my horizons, thus preparing me for an independent life. Furthermore, child as I am, I’m willing to help other. All in all, I believe I have the appropriate qualifications and experience for my further study.

Thanks for your time and consideration. I’d appreciate it if my application could be approved of.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封申請書，重點是介紹自己的相關(guān)情況，性別，年齡，學(xué)習(xí)情況和特長；申請入學(xué)的理由大部分的要點都已經(jīng)給出，考生要根據(jù)要求做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U展，寫作時注意以下幾點：1.仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清楚試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2.提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)分析、構(gòu)思和想象。3.根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】

本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。運用apart from，thus, Furthermore, All in all之類詞，讓語句結(jié)構(gòu)富有邏輯。此外，文章還使用了大量短語in the hope of，have a good command of，take part in，broaden my horizons, be approved of等。child as I am, I’m willing to help other.as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句使用經(jīng)典；I’d appreciate it if my application could be approved of.此處it是形式賓語，if條件句是真正的賓語。

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