Question

請根據(jù)你對以下兩幅圖的理解，以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”為題，用英語寫一篇作文。

參考詞：
banner (橫幅)
stump (樹粧)
你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:
1. 簡要描述兩幅圖的內(nèi)容；
2. 概述你對兩幅圖中不同做法的理解；
3. 舉例說明兩幅圖對你的啟示。
注意：
1. 可參照圖片適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 作文詞數(shù)150左右；
3. 作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
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Answer 1

Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.

本文是一篇看圖作文，給出題目、圖畫和內(nèi)容要求，要求寫一篇觀點類的議論文，主要內(nèi)容是要人們少說空話多做實事，行動比口號更實際，內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活，學(xué)生有話可寫，而且學(xué)生對這類文體的作文比較熟悉，所以篇章結(jié)構(gòu)對他們來說并不是問題。
【寫作要點】1.圖畫描述：第一幅圖里有一顆樹，周圍都是樹樁，一個人想在這顆樹上掛上標(biāo)語，但沒法掛；第二幅圖里一對夫婦正在植樹。2.對文中兩種做法的理解：我們的地球遭到破壞，我們應(yīng)該行動起來保護地球，而不是在那兒空喊口號。3.兩幅圖的啟示：多做實事少說空話，并舉例說明。
【亮點】本例文中心突出，要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，用了許多高級詞匯、句型結(jié)構(gòu)和銜接手段，他們的運用既清楚地描述了要點，又做到了表達的多樣性，使行文流暢。
高級詞匯：celebrate，in vain，convey，suffering severe damage，pay lip service，take practical measures，definitely，accomplish，strictly and voluntarily，make a difference，shouting empty slogans.
句型結(jié)構(gòu)：1. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.（狀語從句）
2. The message conveyed here is clear: “Actions speak louder than words.”（過去分詞作定語）
3. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it?（一般疑問句）
4. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.（被動語態(tài)）
5. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.（It is adj. to do ---.）
6. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. (現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語)
7. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.（倒裝句）