假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧), 并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。
修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意:1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2、只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。
At present we are living in a good age. Therefore, there are still a small number of people who don't act responsible. His bad behaviors are out of place in our civilizing society. For an example, some people often risk their lives to disobey traffic rules. Littering is still a serious problem. Some people are often seen to spit in public places. Bad still, it is common to find silly things writing by some tourists in scenic spots.
To my opinion, everyone should learn to become a responsible citizen. We must aware that everything we do in public places will affect others and we should break our bad habits. As long as we obey the rule in every field and are filled with care and love, our world will become better.


【小題1】Therefore改However
【小題2】responsible改responsibly
【小題3】His改their
【小題4】civilizing改civilized
【小題5】Bad改 Worse
【小題6】writing改written
【小題7】To改In
【小題8】在must和aware之間加be。
【小題9】break改為correct。
【小題10】rule改rules

解析試題分析:我們現(xiàn)在生活在一個(gè)美好的時(shí)代。但是有一些人的不禮貌行為卻與這個(gè)文明的社會(huì)格格不入。如不遵守交通規(guī)則、亂丟垃圾、隨地吐痰、在公共景點(diǎn)隨意刻畫(huà)等。我們應(yīng)該遵守社會(huì)公德,使這個(gè)社會(huì)變得更加美好。
【小題1】第一句是我們現(xiàn)在生活在一個(gè)很好的時(shí)代。但是還有一些人做事不負(fù)責(zé)任。前后兩句矛盾,所以把Therefore改為However。
【小題2】act 是動(dòng)詞,應(yīng)該用副詞修飾,所以把responsible改成responsibly。
【小題3】他們的不禮貌行為在我們這個(gè)文明社會(huì)中是不合適的。前面提到一小部分人,所以應(yīng)該把His改their,以保持人稱(chēng)一致。
【小題4】用civilized(形容詞,文明的)修飾名詞society;所以把civilizing改為civilized。
【小題5】前面舉例說(shuō)明了一些不文明的行為,如不遵守交通規(guī)則、亂丟垃圾、隨地吐痰等。下面還有,所以用Bad的比較級(jí)Worse來(lái)說(shuō)明情況更糟,所以把Bad改為Worse。
【小題6】經(jīng)?吹揭恍┯慰驮诰包c(diǎn)寫(xiě)一些愚蠢的東西。write 和前面的silly things 是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以把writing改為written表被動(dòng)。
【小題7】“依我看”是固定表達(dá):in my opinion ,所以把To改為In。
【小題8】aware是形容詞,前面應(yīng)該用be動(dòng)詞放在must之后。所以 在must和aware之間加be。
【小題9】我們應(yīng)該改正我們的不禮貌的行為。所以把break改為correct。
【小題10】遵守每個(gè)領(lǐng)域的規(guī)則。所以應(yīng)該用rule的復(fù)數(shù)rules。
考點(diǎn):短文改錯(cuò)。

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