分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于外出旅游時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)的不文明現(xiàn)象的作文,呼吁人們提高素質(zhì),文明出行.這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維,將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來(lái).寫(xiě)作需要用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí),內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括:你所看到的不文明現(xiàn)象如到處吐痰;隨意刻劃留名;亂扔垃圾等;你的看法和建議.我們此篇作文分為兩部分,第一部分為外出旅游時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)的不文明現(xiàn)象.第二部分為作者的看法和建議.
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型:
in public在公眾場(chǎng)合
do damage to對(duì)…造成傷害
As far as I am concerned就我而言
be responsible for 對(duì)…負(fù)責(zé)
高分句型一:As far as I am concerned,it's high time we did something to help improve the situation..此句用了it's high time that虛擬語(yǔ)氣
高分句型二:Only when each of us is aware of the importance can we make it a better world.
此句only+狀語(yǔ)從句,主句部分倒裝
解答 Dear editor,
I am writing to tell you something about what I saw while traveling during the holiday.I was so surprised to see so many immoral behaviors in public.For example,some people spit at will wherever they go.some scratch their names on the walls or other buildings,which does great damage to them.Some just litter here and there.(外出旅游時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)的不文明現(xiàn)象 )
As far as I am concerned,it's high time we did something to help improve the situation.(高分句型一) First,certain laws should be passed to make sure people won't damage the environment.Meanwhile,our TV,newspapers,internet and other media should also take responsibility to guide people to be more friendly to the environment.Most importantly,we travelers should learn to be responsible for what we did.Only when each of us is aware of the importance can we make it a better world.(高分句型二)(作者的看法和建議)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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