假如你叫李華, 你的筆友Mike給你寫信說他因體重問題被同學(xué)嘲笑,想節(jié)食減肥,征求你的意見。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格內(nèi)容給他回信,談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh。

注意:

1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

3.文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息;

4.詞數(shù):120左右。

參考詞匯:

節(jié)食go on a diet 均衡飲食a balanced diet

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry you are having a problem with your weight and being laughed at by your classmates.

Yours,

Li Hua

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry you are having a problem with your weight and being laughed at by your classmates.

Don’t feel bad because of your weight problem. In my heart, health is more important than look. Only with good health can we enjoy life to the fullest. If you want to lose weight and keep healthy at the same time, I have some suggestions for you.

Firstly, having a balanced diet will give you enough energy during the day. It’s of great benefit to your health. And going on a diet blindly is harmful to your health. Secondly, regular exercise is a good way to keep healthy and slim. Make a plan and determine to carry it out every day, you’ll find you lose weight gradually. Finally, ignore those who laugh at you. Make friends with someone who really cares about you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題解析:這是一篇書信寫作,主要描述一下你對(duì)于筆友被同學(xué)嘲笑肥胖的看法,并對(duì)筆友提出建議,題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容,寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,以保證文章的連貫性。文章第二段先用祈使句簡明扼要的安慰了筆友,接著運(yùn)用了比較級(jí)點(diǎn)明自己的看法,再使用only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句和條件狀語從句,引出自己給出建議的想法。句子通順,很有層次感。文章第三段用firstly,and,secondly,finally等詞連接建議使文章條理清晰,并在其中使用了動(dòng)名詞做主語來引導(dǎo)句子,以及用了祈使句等,使文章句型豐富多樣。整篇文章用了大量的固定搭配,如be of great benefit to,be harmful to,make a plan,determine to do sth等,使文章句子更加有內(nèi)涵,更精彩?傊疚木涫蕉鄻,句型豐富,文章連貫,是一篇精彩之作。

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