Question

以“My friend XXX”為題，寫一篇短文。包括以下要點：
名字，性別，外表簡單描述。
興趣愛好。
你們在一起的情況。
他/她的家庭情況。
總結。
要求：1）詞數：100左右；      2）字跡工整，卷面整潔。
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Answer 1

Zhang Dong is my best friend. He entered our class last term. He is a boy. He has short straight, black eyes and a small nose. so we often have a talk in English in our spare time. After school, we often play football together on the playground.
He is an excellent student. He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest. He is fond of music.
There are three people in his family and he is the only child. His father is a doctor and his mother is a Beijing Opera actress. Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed.
Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy. He is highly praised by the teachers and students.

試題分析：寫好提綱式作文的關鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇范文觀點明確，要點齊全，句式富有變化：He has short straight, black eyes and a small nose. so we often have a talk in English in our spare time. 這句話是并列句和原因狀語從句， He not only gets good marks in all subjects but also is very kind and modest.這句話用了not only…but also….， He is fond of music.這句話用了詞組：be fond of“喜歡”Though Zhang Dong's family is wealthy, he is usually simply dressed. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句， Such is my friend, a clever and kind boy.這是一個倒裝句。