Question

12．In your English class，your teacher shows you he following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文．根據(jù)對圖片的理解及英語提示寫一篇短文．寫作時可按"二段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點明主題，分析其含義，最后發(fā)表感想．
亮點句型一：By the side of the old man lies a sleeping little pet dog．在老人的身邊躺著一只睡覺的小寵物狗．本句是一個倒裝句．地點狀語By the side of the old man 置于句首，句子要做全部倒裝．
亮點句型二：So parents do whatever they can to take good care of their children．所以父母盡他們所能來照顧好他們的孩子．本句是一個由whatever引導的賓語從句whatever they，動詞不定式to take good care of their children在句中做目的狀語．

解答 In the picture there is an old man sitting alone on the bench in a park．He is looking at a young mother holding the bike for her little daughter while she is riding it．By the side of the old man lies a sleeping little pet dog．（亮點句型一）
     This is a plcture of great contrast．By the look on the man's face，we can tell the old man feels a bit lonely．However，the little girl，enjoying her mother's company，is playing happily．Nowadays，all families have only one child．So parents do whatever they can to take good care of their children．（亮點句型二）There's nothing wrong with that．But meanwhile，as far as I'm concerned，not only the young but also the old in our society deserve good care and enough attention．The needs of the old shouldn't be ignored．
     In conclusion，we shouldn't lose the good tradition of caring for the old．

點評 寫作看圖作文時，首先認真看圖，結合圖片和文字，確定所要表達的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點，合理想象，對譯出的要點通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達連貫．同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型