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3．假如你是李津，最近你在瀏覽一個(gè)美國(guó)中學(xué)生網(wǎng)站時(shí)，看到一個(gè)名叫Stephen的中學(xué)生的留言，他計(jì)劃在暑假期間到中國(guó)的一些文化特色鮮明的地方來(lái)旅游，希望能有一名中國(guó)學(xué)生做他的導(dǎo)游．你對(duì)此很感興趣，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示寫(xiě)一封E-mail給他，介紹你的相關(guān)情況．
1．如何得知他的愿望；
2．希望做他的導(dǎo)游；
3．如何給他做導(dǎo)游；
4．期盼他的回復(fù)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于l00：
2．請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；
3．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
4．開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
名勝places of interests
Dear Stephen，
      ．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Because you want to travel some places with deep and thick culture，and I'm familiar with these places，such as Beijing，Shandong，and Shanxi，I'll be your perfect guide．
高分句型二：
I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings，traditional customs，special cultural activities to you．
句型一 Because you want to travel some places…該句是一個(gè)由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，在and后面的簡(jiǎn)單句謂語(yǔ)部分使用了固定短語(yǔ)：be familiar with對(duì)..熟悉．．
句型二 I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings…該句中有以下一些重要的短語(yǔ)和固定用法：show sb around sp 帶某人參觀某地  places of interests  名勝古跡 a large number of 許多

解答 Dear Stephen，
        Recently，when I surfed a senior high school website of the USA，I saw the message you posted on it．I know you have planned to travel to China and need a student to serve as your guide．I'm writing to apply for the job．（寫(xiě)作目的）Because you want to travel some places with deep and thick culture，and I'm familiar with these places，such as Beijing，Shandong，and Shanxi，I'll be your perfect guide．（高分句型一）
     I'll show you around many places of interests introducing a large number of old buildings，traditional customs，special cultural activities to you．（高分句型二）You will have a deeper impression of these places．And I'll also invite you to play and talk with the local people to learn more about their life．I think I can help you with your communication well．
     All in all，I hope you'll believe in me and my excellent ability of guiding．（提出期望）Looking forward to your immediate reply．
 Yours，
 Li Jin

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