【題目】假定你是李華,你校交換生Tom發(fā)郵件詢問你校即將來臨的藝術節(jié),請你寫封郵件回復他。內(nèi)容包括:

1. 時間和地點;

2. 內(nèi)容;

3. 邀請Tom參加。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? In your email, you asked me to tell you something about the coming Arts Festival in our school. Now I am writing for that purpose.

The Arts Festival will begin next Friday morning at 8 o’clock on the playground. And it will last the whole day. On the opening ceremony, students will put on wonderful performances, which are nice to enjoy. There will displays of art works by teachers and students of our school. We will also invite local artists to share their works with us and give students guidance. Besides, everyone is welcome to take part in the festival. You can also bring your own works. I will be happy to see you at the Arts Festival.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生回一封電子郵件給對即將來臨藝術節(jié)感興趣的交換生Tom,告知他藝術節(jié)的相關事宜。

第一步:審題

體裁:應用文

時態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結構:總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:1. 時間和地點;

2. 內(nèi)容;

3. 邀請Tom參加。

第二步:列提綱 (重點詞組)

ask sb. to do sth.;the Arts Festival;the opening ceremony;put oninvite sb. to do sth.;give sb. guidance;be welcome totake part in

第三步:連詞成句

1. you asked me to tell you something about the coming Arts Festival in our school.

2. On the opening ceremony, students will put on wonderful performances,

3. We will also invite local artists to share their works with us and give students guidance.

4. everyone is welcome to take part in the festival.

(根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。)

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結構順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉折對比關系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達:In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實:In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇:either…or…or

連句成文,注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步:潤色修改

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