Question

6．假定你班在"珍愛生命，拒闖紅燈"教育活動中，召開了一次主題班會．請你根據(jù)下表中的內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文．

行人闖紅燈的危害	1．妨礙交通，影響車輛的正常行駛．
	2．容易引發(fā)事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全．
	3．…（自己設(shè)想）
對行人闖紅燈的處罰措施	1．批評教育，讓其意識到闖紅燈的危害性．
	2．當(dāng)場給予警告并罰款．
	3．…（自己設(shè)想）

注意：
1．內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)：120左右．
參考詞匯：pedestrian n．（行人）；jay-walk vi．（亂穿馬路）； reprimand vt．（批評，訓(xùn)誡）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
This blocks traffic，seriously ①affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering②the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．
這阻礙了交通，嚴(yán)重影響了司機并導(dǎo)致了事故的發(fā)生，同時也危及了行人和司機的安全．
①副詞seriously在句中作狀語，修飾動詞affects．
②此處為現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，由于動詞endanger與其邏輯主語This構(gòu)成主謂關(guān)系，故用endangering．
句型二：
 When caught①jay-walking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that ②they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot③．
當(dāng)被抓到闖紅燈時，行人會受到訓(xùn)斥或當(dāng)場被罰款，以便讓他們意識到這樣做的危險．
①此處為過去分詞作時間狀語，由于動詞catch與其邏輯主語pedestrians構(gòu)成被動關(guān)系，故用過去分詞caught．
②so that"以便，為了"引導(dǎo)目的狀語從句．
③on the spot意為：立刻，當(dāng)場．

解答 One possible version：
Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of pedestrians crossing the street while the traffic light is red．（首先介紹主題班會的內(nèi)容）As we can see，some pedestrians don't obey traffic rules and jay-walk frequently．This blocks traffic，seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen，endangering the safety of pedestrians and drivers alike．【高分句型一】In a word，jay-walking produces negative effects and does not help to develop good social behavior．（說明行人闖紅燈的危害）
   It is really a pity to see all this in our society and to deal with the situation，the government has taken some measures．When caught jay-walking，pedestrians are reprimanded so that they will become aware of the dangers of doing this，or they are fined on the spot．【高分句型二】Sometimes the traffic police will report jaywalkers to their workplace and expose them to the public．（對行人闖紅燈的處罰措施）However，it will still take a long time to stop pedestrians from jay-walking．（指出制止行人闖紅燈這一行為還需要一些時間）

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