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10．假如你是學(xué)生會主席李華，為了讓國人了解中華民族的傳統(tǒng)文化，學(xué)生會面向?qū)W校國際部組織留學(xué)生報名參加"漢字聽寫大賽"，請你根據(jù)提示寫一則英文通知，在校報上刊登．主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．報名時請告知姓名和國籍；
2．聽寫范圍：中國四大名著中的詞匯；
3．參賽日期：2017年5月15日；
4．獎品：一套中國四大名著；
5．報名聯(lián)系人：李華；電話：12345678910．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文流暢．開頭已為你寫好．不計入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：1、四大名著：the Four Great Classical Novels
2、漢字聽寫大賽  Chinese Character Dictation Competition
Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity：the Student Union will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition．I'd like to share with you some details．
As scheduled，the competition is to be held on May 15th，2017．（高分句型一）You are supposed to get prepared before the competition．Above all，it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．（高分句型二）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture，please sign up for the competition as soon as possible．（高分句型三） If you want to go，please call Li Hua at 12345678910，stating your name and nationality．Don't miss the chance of being the winner，and the appealing prize"a set of the four Great Classical Novels"is eagerly waiting for you．
Come on，don't hesitate to take part!I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress．．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求考生以李華的身份寫一則英文啟事，歡迎學(xué)校國際部組織外國留學(xué)生報名參加"漢字聽寫大賽"．要使用第三人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時為主的時態(tài)．要點：1．聽寫范圍：中國四大名著中的詞匯．2．參賽日期：2017年5月15日．3．獎品：一套中國古典名著．4．報名聯(lián)系人：李華；電話：12345678910；本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的啟事，一定要注意啟事的格式和過渡語．同時要注意使用熟悉的句式和詞匯，適當(dāng)使用串聯(lián)詞，不要顯得過于堆砌．
【名師點睛】
本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，涵蓋了所有要點．且在各部分之間添加了適當(dāng)內(nèi)容，讓要點的轉(zhuǎn)折更流暢．另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力．作者在范文中使用了較多的復(fù)合句式，如倒裝句Here comes your opportunity．虛擬語氣及形式主語句it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．主語從句Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture．另外文章中使用了較多的高級詞匯，如be supposed to do sth、get prepared、recommend以及benefit a lot等．這些技巧及詞匯的使用讓文章顯得更有文采．

解答 Notice
      Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity：the Student Union will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition．I'd like to share with you some details．
      As scheduled，the competition is to be held on May 15th，2017．（高分句型一）You are supposed to get prepared before the competition．Above all，it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．（高分句型二）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture，please sign up for the competition as soon as possible．（高分句型三） If you want to go，please call Li Hua at 12345678910，stating your name and nationality．Don't miss the chance of being the winner，and the appealing prize"a set of the four Great Classical Novels"is eagerly waiting for you．
      Come on，don't hesitate to take part!I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．