受人喜愛的個(gè)性品質(zhì) | 對(duì)待集體 | 熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng),具有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神,工作負(fù)責(zé) |
對(duì)待他人 | 尊重、關(guān)心他人,富有同情心,… | |
對(duì)待自己 | (考生自己擬定內(nèi)容,列舉至少兩點(diǎn))… |
分析 本篇書面表達(dá)是要求寫一篇題目為"Being a popular student"的討論稿.寫作內(nèi)容貼近學(xué)生生活,也反映了每個(gè)同學(xué)的內(nèi)心愿望,所以同學(xué)們寫起來應(yīng)該是得心應(yīng)手.但是寫作時(shí)要注意以下幾個(gè)方面:一 文章要點(diǎn)較多,注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn).二 從段落安排上可以把要求的三個(gè)方面分三段來寫,恰當(dāng)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,使文章層次分明,條理清楚.三 寫作時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂妹~,代詞單復(fù)數(shù)形式和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào),以免給人內(nèi)容含混不清的感覺.四 文章內(nèi)容屬于發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn),看法,所以可以用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài).
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文在語言表達(dá)上清晰流暢,而且要點(diǎn)全面.在段落安排上用三個(gè)不定式短語分別引出對(duì)集體,對(duì)他人,對(duì)自己三個(gè)方面,使文章層次分明,條理清晰.此外連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用也是本文的一大亮點(diǎn),比如:not only…but also,while in time of difficulty;all in all,as a result 等.不僅如此,文中出現(xiàn)的大量短語be popular with,take an active part in,regard..as,make an effort to,In time of success,lend a hand to sb不僅反映出作者詞匯的豐富,而且也使文章更加簡(jiǎn)潔明了,清晰易懂.總之這是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文.
To enjoy popularity,we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities.(高分句型一)
To be a popular student,we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development,being good not only at our lessons but also at sports,music,painting,social services and so on.(高分句型二)
All in all,being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.(高分句型三)
解答 Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.To enjoy popularity,we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities.(高分句型一)We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind.
To be a popular student,we must show our respect,concern and sympathy for others.As a result,we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.
To be a popular student,we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development,being good not only at our lessons but also at sports,music,painting,social services and so on.(高分句型二)In time of success we remain modest,while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded.
All in all,being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.(高分句型三)
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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