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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

Tom is no longer the boy he used to be. Only a year before, he was overweight and a little lazy. He got tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat. These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises.

Answer 1

【答案】Tom is no longer the boy he used to be . Only a year before, he was overweight and la little lazy. He got

ago

tiring easily and did not like sports. It was not until he got serious ill that he realized that he should

tired seriously

make a change. He started to exercise and begin to eat a healthier diet of more vegetables or less meat.

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These changes helped her lose a lot of weight. He is now a very happy boy at very good shape, and that

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he is always so active.

We can learn from Tom that we should^ careful about what we eat and make sure that we take enough exercises. be或careful改care

exercise

【解析】第一處：before+時間；時間+ago；在……之前。E.g:before a year; a year ago 一年前。答案：before→ago。

第二處：tiring無聊的，累人的，tired疲倦的。句意應(yīng)為：他很容易感到疲倦。答案：tiring→tired。

第三處：修飾ill生病的應(yīng)用副詞形式。答案：serious→seriously。

第四處：由并列動詞started可知此處begin也應(yīng)為過去時。答案：begin→began。

第五處：更多的水果和更少的肉。此處應(yīng)為并列，用and。答案：or→and。

第六處：文章主人公為男生，her應(yīng)改為him。答案：her→him。

第七處：be in a good shape處于一個良好的外形狀態(tài)，為固定搭配。答案：at→in。

第八處：that在此處為多余成分，應(yīng)去掉。答案：去掉that。

第九處：should后應(yīng)有動詞，故在careful前加be，或?qū)?/span>careful改為care。答案：careful前加be，或careful→care。

第十處：exercise譯為鍛煉時為不可數(shù)名詞，譯為練習(xí)時為可數(shù)名詞。此處意思為鍛煉，應(yīng)為復(fù)數(shù)形式，故應(yīng)加S。答案：exercise→exercises。