Question

短文改錯（共10 小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was little boy. He did not want share things with
other people. For example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place,
that I couldn’t find. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy.
In other words, a game of tennis made him very busy. He did not care if something that he did
it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strongly and loud music till four o’clock
in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps grandma with houseworks, helps mom
with cooking and helps his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

小題1:was∧a
小題2:want∧to
小題3:them 改成it
小題4:that改成which
小題5:other改成 Others
小題6:is改成 was
小題7:去掉it
小題8:strongly改成strong
小題9:difference改成different
小題10:houseworks改成housework

試題分析：
小題1:little boy是可數(shù)名詞，要加不定冠詞a
小題2:固定搭配，want to do sth 想做某事。
小題3:put的賓語是a chocolate cake所以應(yīng)用代詞it。
小題4:定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中做find的賓語所以用關(guān)系代詞which/that,作賓語時關(guān)系代詞還可省略。
小題5:這里other指其他人，不是指一個人所以應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。
小題6:said是過去式，它的從句中的謂語動詞應(yīng)是過去式，所以用was.
小題7:that he did是定語從句修飾something，that在定語從句中做賓語，去掉it。
小題8:此處strong和loud修飾名詞music所以用形容詞不用副詞。
小題9:different形容詞做is的表語，意思是他現(xiàn)在不同了。
小題10:housework是不可數(shù)名詞
點評：短文敘述了Tom小時候是怎樣的自私，而現(xiàn)在與以前不同了。文章前半部分用的是過去時，敘述現(xiàn)在的情況時用的是現(xiàn)在時。答題中注意句子中人稱和數(shù)是否一致，時態(tài)是否一致。各種詞性之間的區(qū)別以及一些常用句型，固定短語的應(yīng)用。這類題型考察的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)知識。平時應(yīng)注重積累，熟記一些句型及慣用結(jié)構(gòu)。修改前先細讀短文，標出出錯的位置，改完以后還得細讀短文，看看改過后的短文是否語意通順，符合邏輯。