Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你的美國筆友Tom對中國文化有濃厚的興趣。恰好你校今年寒假將為外國學(xué)生舉辦一場漢語冬令營活動(dòng)（Chinese Winter Camp），請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2. 內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)日常漢語、了解中國歷史和傳統(tǒng)文化、參觀博物館等；

3. 報(bào)名方式和截止時(shí)間。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120左右。2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Tom,

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Yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom，

Here comes a piece of good news. Chinese Winter Camp, which is intended for international students, is going to be held in our school this summer vacation. Since you are obsessed with Chinese culture, I'd like to invite you to join it.

The Camp is scheduled to last 11 days, from December 18 to December 28. It covers a wide variety of cultural activities, ranging from studying Chinese daily expressions to attending some lectures on Chinese history and traditional culture. As we all know, language is closely related to culture, so I'm convinced that you can dig out Chinese cultural features from language study. In addition, the Camp provides a chance for you to visit some famous museums, which is the best way to learn about the country. By admiring the historical relics, you will definitely gain a better understanding of the country.

If you want to be part of it, please sign up for it before December 2d at our school website. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Lihua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封電子郵件：假定你是李華。你的美國筆友Tom對中國文化有濃厚的興趣。恰好你校今年寒假將為外國學(xué)生舉辦一場漢語冬令營活動(dòng)，請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2. 內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)日常漢語、了解中國歷史和傳統(tǒng)文化、參觀博物館等；3. 報(bào)名方式和截止時(shí)間。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； Chinese Winter Camp（漢語冬令營活動(dòng)），traditional culture（傳統(tǒng)文化），daily expressions（日常表達(dá)），museum（博物館）， historical relics（歷史遺跡）及definitely（肯定）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。

本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。