Question

1．假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生張華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)一名同學(xué)李明，他一時(shí)
無(wú)法融入到新的班集體中，感到很苦惱．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)封
信：
1．幫他分析原因；
2、給他提出建議；
3、陳述你幫助他的具體打算．
注意：1．詞數(shù)為100-120右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2．信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Ming，
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and  you may often feel lonely．                                      
Best regards，
Zhang Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作．要求用英文根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給從外地轉(zhuǎn)來(lái)一名同學(xué)李明寫(xiě)一封信．要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，信件要點(diǎn)包括：幫他分析原因，給他提出建議，陳述你幫助他的具體打算，審題時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)的選擇，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述．象范文的That's because you are new here and people don't know about you．使用了表語(yǔ)從句，還有With time going on，people will know you better and like to make friends with you．用了with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)．還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫First，Second，Thirdly，Besides等．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
       I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely．That's because you are new here and people don't know about you．（高分句型）But I think you can make it if you follow the advice below．
       First，you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters，and at the same time，learn to listen to other people's views．（高分句型）Second，it's better to learn about your classmates'likes and dislikes．Then you can have much in common with them．Thirdly，why not get to know more different people and show them you are also friendly．
       Besides，I'm always ready to help you to join in some activities and I would like to introduce you to others．With time going on，people will know you better and like to make friends with you．（高分句型）
       I hope you will find these ideas useful and get on well with your classmates soon．                                                
                                                                                                                                                                                      Best regards，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Zhang Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．