【題目】假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。你校英語社團(tuán)的微信公眾號(hào)正在開展以 “Changes in Our Life”為題的征文活動(dòng)。要求同學(xué)們談一談這些年來,在生活方 面發(fā)生的、使人們受益的變化,F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你投稿,文章內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:

(1)描述生活上發(fā)生的變化(兩個(gè)方面);

(2)這些變化給人們帶來的好處;

(3)相信未來生活更加美好。

注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;

(2)內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫;

(3)題目已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Changes in Our Life

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By Li Jin

【答案】Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.As for the modern network technology, I think we have experienced it. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.As for the mode of transportation, with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel, Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.

These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.

I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類書面表達(dá),要求考生談一談這些年來,在生活方面發(fā)生的、使人們受益的變化。

第一步:審題

類別:提綱類

時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:1.描述生活上發(fā)生的變化(兩個(gè)方面);

2. 表明變化給人們帶來的好處;

3.表達(dá)相信未來生活更加美好之情。

第二步:列提綱 (重點(diǎn)詞組)

Change; take place; modern network technology; transportation mode; As for; experience; shop online; keep abreast of; at home and abroad; living standard; pay more attention to; Shared bikes; environmental protection;

第三步:連詞成句

1. Great changes have taken place in our life in recent years, among which the most impressive one is the change in modern network technology and transportation mode.

2. We can shop online and keep abreast of the news and events at home and abroad.

3. with the improvement of living standard, people pay more attention to green travel.

4. Shared bikes and some public transportation tools are becoming very popular.

5. These changes make our life more convenient and greatly improve work efficiency and life efficiency.

6. It is also more in line with the concept of environmental protection.

7. I believe that through the efforts of our generation, we will make life better and happier.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other hand Some,while others,as for, sothat

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,

第五步:潤(rùn)色修改

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