Question

留意一下我們的周邊，可以發(fā)現(xiàn)父母在學(xué)校附近租房陪讀現(xiàn)象已蔚然成風(fēng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．      簡(jiǎn)要描述陪讀現(xiàn)象；
2．分析父母陪讀的原因（2至3個(gè)）；
3．發(fā)表你對(duì)此的看法。 
要求： 1）可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
2）詞數(shù)：120字左右。首段已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Should Our Parents Accompany Us in Studying at School?
In recent years, many parents choose to accompany their children in studying, which has aroused a wide concern.
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Answer 1

Nowadays more and more people are sending their children overseas for further study, even at middle school age. 38% of the people investigated agreed to this. They think their children can receive better education and learn a foreign language as well. And they have more golden opportunities to develop themselves. What is the most valuable is to learn to depend on themselves and to broaden their horizons and improve their understanding of the world.
However, over 62% of the people, especially some educationists and parents, are not in favor of this, for they think studying abroad costs over ten times as much money as in China, besides, children are too young to take care of themselves. Many parents worry about the safety of their children. What’s more, they might follow bad examples.
In my opinion, measures should be taken by the government to set up various schools and colleges to meet the needs of the people.

試題分析：考查半開放性作文，所給的要點(diǎn)不多，需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充，父母陪讀的原因可以從父母擔(dān)心學(xué)校里不能提供很好的食宿條件，怕影響學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。