Question

假設你是紅旗中學高二一班的學生小明，你班將舉行《我的夢想》（My Dream）的英文主題班會。請寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上與同學進行交流。要點如下：

1、夢想職業(yè)---記者；

2、職業(yè)要求：思維敏捷，有創(chuàng)造力，對事情有獨特觀點；

3、自己的兩點優(yōu)勢（考生自由發(fā)揮）；

4、為實現(xiàn)目標而努力。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)不少于120。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

2. 可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share with you about my dream. Frankly, I dream to be a journalist. As far as I know, it is a great challenge to be a journalist. First of all, we have to be sharp in mind so as to react to different situations quickly. Secondly, creativity can help us produce outstanding ideas. What’s more, it is necessary for us to hold unique opinions towards hot issues.

Just as you see, my qualities just meet the requirements above. Besides, I am social and love communicating with different people. It is an essential character helping me gather a wide variety of news materials. And I have plenty of hobbies, which inspire me to have the passion of covering stories in different fields.

I believe all these can make me a good journalist as long as I am committed and never give up.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿。文章首句已寫好，第一個要點也已經(jīng)寫好。寫作的要點集中在寫“記者的職業(yè)要求”及“我的優(yōu)勢”。職業(yè)要求包括三點：1.思維敏捷2。有創(chuàng)造力3.對事情有獨特觀�？梢杂靡恍┍硎静⒘械脑~或遞進的詞進行連接。如：First of all，Secondly， What’s more等詞。其中“我的優(yōu)勢”部分，需要自己發(fā)揮，寫出兩點優(yōu)勢。屬于半開放型作文。同樣可用一些詞進行層次連接。文章最后表達我的決心：為實現(xiàn)目標而努力。

考點：發(fā)言稿

點評：談論有關理想的發(fā)言稿。第一部分：開門見山地提出本人要談的問題——理想是什么，第二部分：說明理由：為什么選擇這一理想。如：對理想的認識，個人具備的優(yōu)勢。常用到的連接成分有：first of all,secondly,finally等等。第三部分：照應開頭，總結全文�？梢詫θ�文作簡明扼要的總結，也可以談自己的感想、看法或期望。常用到的句式有：In short…,In a word,I think,I expect等