14.外國中學(xué)生Amy第一次來上海,由你陪同她參觀.請你挑選一個具體的地方,將此次陪同的設(shè)想寫成短文.短文應(yīng)包含以下信息:
1描述你打算帶她去的那個地方.
2闡述你挑選那個地方的理由.
●參考詞語:
Oriental TV Tower;
the Bund;
Shanghai Museum;
Yu Garden;
a …market/fair;
a …community/school/home

分析 這是一篇提綱作文,讓我們陪同第一次來上海的外國中學(xué)生Amy參觀一個具體的地方,將此次陪同的設(shè)想寫成短文.這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維,將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來.寫作需要用第一人稱,時態(tài)主要是一般將來時,內(nèi)容要點包括:陪同第一次來上海的外國中學(xué)生Amy參觀一個具體的地方.描述你打算帶她去的那個地方.闡述你挑選那個地方的理由.我們此篇作文分為兩部分,第一部分為描述你打算帶她去的那個地方.第二部分為闡述你挑選那個地方的理由.
重點短語與句型:
The Oriental Pearl TV Tower東方明珠塔
is also known as 作為…而出名
 is located in 位于
The tower,surrounded by the Yangpu Bridge in the northeast and the Nanpu Bridge in the southwest,creates a picture  of'twin dragons playing with pearls此句用了過去分詞surrounded作后置定語,修飾the tower.
The tower creates a picture of twin dragons playing with pearls.此句用了動名詞playing作介詞of的賓語,動名詞前加了自己的邏輯主語 twin dragons.

解答 The Oriental Pearl TV Tower,is  also known as the Oriental Pearl,is a TV tower in Shanghai,China.The Oriental Pearl TV Tower is located in Pudong Park in Lujiazui District,Shanghai.Oriental Pearl TV Tower is Shanghai Modern Architectural Design (Group) Co.,Ltd.Jiang Huan into the design.Construction started in 1991,completed in 1994,a total investment of 8.3 billion yuan.467.9 meters high,in Asia,it is the world's third tower,behind Canada,Canada's National Tower (553.3 meters),and Russia's Ostankino Tower (540.1 meters).The tower,surrounded 過去分詞作后置定語by the Yangpu Bridge in the northeast and the Nanpu Bridge in the southwest,creates a picture of'twin dragons playing with pearls'(雙龍戲珠).打算帶她去參觀東方明珠塔
The entire scene is a photographic jewel that excites the imagination and attracts thousands of visitors year-round.The tower is one of Shanghai's landmarks.  參觀東方電視塔理由

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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