請你根據(jù)以下提示,并結(jié)合事例,用英語寫一篇短文。
Sharing is caring when it is given from the heart with pleasure.
The good returns are many and the rewards cannot be measured.
注意: ①無須寫標題;
②除詩歌外,文體不限;
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;
④詞數(shù)為120左右,如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。


Sharing is to us what air is to humans. We must learn to share with somebody. Sharing is not only physical but also mental satisfaction. I know sharing brings happiness.
The other day, just when I was caught in the sadness of failing the exam, you like an angel suddenly appeared. You told and taught me how to deal with these questions. Gradually, I knew the saying “The roses in her hand; the flavor in mine” I usually share my textbooks with others. And sometimes sharing a story which is full of encouragement can comfort people who are in trouble.                         
“Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” In a word, the more things we share with others, the more happiness we can have.(128字)

解析試題分析:本文是篇材料作文,材料非常簡單,學(xué)生很容易把握寫作要求和寫作目的?忌趯懽髦氨匦拚J真審題,首先要注意文章的時態(tài),要求是敘述一件事情來反映主題,所以要用一般過去時。但本文必須用第一、三人稱。再有就是不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接,以提高作文的檔次。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少,比如share with,deal with,be full of,in trouble,還運用了what引導(dǎo)的表語從句;動名詞短語做主語,which和who引導(dǎo)定語從句等等。并注意了句子的銜接如:in a word,gradually,not only…but also…等等。
考點:提綱作文

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