Question

5．假定你是李華．學校將在暑假期間組織到泰山進行研學旅行（educational excursion）．請給你校國際班的Peter寫封郵件．內(nèi)容包括：1．活動時間、目的地；
2．活動目的；
3．邀請他參加．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
Our school is planning an educational excursion to Mount Tai from August 6 to August 10 during this summer vacation．I can't wait to invite you to take part in it．
As we know，we students are spending most of our time on the campus．As a result，we are almost cut off from the outside world．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．
I believe the excursion will be both exciting and rewarding．And we're eagerly expecting your coming．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封邀請信．個題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般將來時．內(nèi)容包括：一說明活動的時間，地點，并且發(fā)出邀請；二活動的目的；三對活動的信心并且再次邀請．
高分句型：
1．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．句子里provide表示"提供"；get closer to 表示"更貼近"；which 引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句； contribute to 表示"有助于"．
我希望這次研學旅行能夠為我們提供一個更貼近大自然的機會，這肯定會有助于我們的身心健康．
2．What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．句子里What's more表示"此外"； broaden our horizons 表示"開拓我們的視野"；experiencing the local cultures是現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語，表示體驗當?shù)氐奈幕��?br />此外，通過體驗當?shù)氐奈幕�，這次研學旅行能夠開拓我們的視野．

解答 Dear Peter，
   Our school is planning an educational excursion to Mount Tai from August 6 to August 10 during this summer vacation．I can't wait to invite you to take part in it．（說明活動的時間，地點，并且發(fā)出邀請）
    As we know，we students are spending most of our time on the campus．As a result，we are almost cut off from the outside world．Hopefully，the excursion will provide us a good chance to get closer to nature，which will definitely contribute to our physical and mental health．【高分句型一】What's more，the excursion will surely broaden our horizons by experiencing the local cultures．【高分句型二】（活動的目的）
    I believe the excursion will be both exciting and rewarding．And we're eagerly expecting your coming．（對活動的信心并且再次邀請）
                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                             Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類寫作是近年高考英語書面表達的熱點題型，命題人 通常以提綱作文的形式考查書信、報道、通知、日記、發(fā)言稿、對某人或某物的介紹、歡迎詞等．提綱作文的選材范圍很廣，內(nèi)容簡單易懂，且多是考生熟悉的話題．這類題型的主要特點 是要點明確，范圍具體．但考生也容易受中文提綱的制約，將 書面表達變成了翻譯，造成語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯上的單調(diào)，甚至寫 出結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子．