Question

12．某英語網(wǎng)站的學(xué)習(xí)和交流欄目最近推出一個討論話題"What kind of teacher do you like best？"邀請網(wǎng)友積極參與討論．假如你是李華，你打算參加這個交流活動．請寫一篇英語短文，描述你最喜歡哪種類型的老師，并陳述你的理由．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時不僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文．需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題．盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．
First of all，he or she is always enthusiastic about teaching and love students．（高分句型一）首先，他或她總是對教學(xué)充滿熱情并且熱愛學(xué)生．
Since students need motivation to learn，a good teacher should motivate students to keep on trying until they achieve their goals．（高分句型二）因為學(xué)生需要學(xué)習(xí)激勵，一個好的老師應(yīng)該激勵學(xué)生不斷努力直到實現(xiàn)目標(biāo)．

解答 Many teachers have taught me since I started school．I'd like this kind of teacher best：First of all，he or she is always enthusiastic about teaching and love students．（高分句型一）Besides，he or she knows how to motivated students to work on their lessons．More importantly，he or she is willing to make friends with students．My reasons are as follows：
    In my opinion，if a teacher has no passion for teaching，his or her class is boring．A passionate teacher will always try to make his or her class interesting，so the students will learn happily in class．Since students need motivation to learn，a good teacher should motivate students to keep on trying until they achieve their goals．（高分句型二）In addition，we students may meet with problems from time to time，so we need someone to talk to．If our teacher is our friend，we can share our problems with him or her．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．