Question

11．假如你叫李華，最近你校在為一批來自英國的假期學生征尋住宿家庭，你有意申請．請用英語寫封自薦信，說明你申請的理由．
1．介紹家庭情況
2．可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3．詞數(shù)100左右；開頭已寫好，不入計總詞數(shù)．
住宿家庭 host family．
Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality，my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them．Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）In addition，my mother is expert in cooking，and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，最近你校在為一批來自英國的假期學生征尋住宿家庭，你有意申請．請用英語寫封自薦信，說明你申請的理由，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：介紹家庭情況；可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫；2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：Located in位于，坐落于；Apart from除…之外；places of interest名勝古跡； have no difficulty  in doing sth做…方面沒有困難；Above all最重要的是；In addition另外；
．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）
  I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir，
I'm writing to request a valuable chance to be one of the host families for the British students．Located in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood，our large fully-equipped apartment can meet all their needs．（高分句型一）
Apart from the convenient public transportation，our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest．With fluent English and an outgoing personality，my parents and I are sure to have no difficulty communicating with them．Above all，we have hosted some American friends，through which we've gained lots of experience．（高分句型二）In addition，my mother is expert in cooking，and it can guarantee them a wonderful chance of tasting delicious Chinese food．
I would greatly appreciate it if I could have the chance to host them and make friends with them．（高分句型三）Looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．