Question

健康與財(cái)富一直是人們討論的一個(gè)熱門話題(hot topic)，究竟哪個(gè)更重要些？有的人認(rèn)為健康比財(cái)富更重要，而有的人認(rèn)為財(cái)富比健康更重要。請(qǐng)以Health and wealth為題寫一篇英文短文。

提示：1.簡(jiǎn)述人們對(duì)“健康與財(cái)富”的兩種不同看法；

2.簡(jiǎn)述你自己的觀點(diǎn)及理由。

注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

2.詞數(shù)100左右。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Which one is more important, health or wealth? This is a hot topic we are always discussing. Some people say that health is more important than wealth. However, others argue that wealth is more important than health.

As far as I am concerned, health is more important than wealth. There are at least two reasons for this. Firstly, money can’t buy health. If you are in poor health, money is of no use. Secondly, as long as you are in good health, you can enjoy your life better and make more money.

Of course, we can’t live without money. So I think keeping fit is the first and then we should make some money to make our life easier. Anyhow, without health, everything means nothing to you. Please keep fit!

【解析】本文是一篇議論文，話題也是考生非常熟悉的健康與財(cái)富；可能大部分的考生會(huì)寫健康比財(cái)富更重要，因?yàn)樽謹(jǐn)?shù)有限，所以文章要力求簡(jiǎn)潔，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，不要拖沓。同時(shí)也要使用個(gè)別的高級(jí)句型和高級(jí)詞匯，要用合適的連接詞讓文章更流暢。