Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)通過(guò)掃描二維碼就可以輕松實(shí)現(xiàn)移動(dòng)支付，感到好奇，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)郵件解釋。

要點(diǎn)如下：簡(jiǎn)要介紹。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

How are you doing? I’m delighted to tell you some information about how mobile payment is widely used in China, which makes people’s daily life increasingly convenient.

Mobile payment has a wide variety of functions, such as buying breakfast on the street as well as purchasing tickets in the subway station. By mobile payment, we can pay easily wherever we go, offering us a new level of convenience. With payment apps on our smart phones, we only need to scan the QR code to pay and within one or two seconds, the payment process can be completed. What’s more, we needn’t worry about wallet or money being stolen any more. Nor do we need to be afraid of receiving fake money.

Mobile payment has witnesses great changes in people’s life. It seems that China is really leading in some aspects and we are proud of that.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這篇書(shū)面表達(dá)是一封電子郵件寫(xiě)作。假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)通過(guò)掃描二維碼就可以輕松實(shí)現(xiàn)移動(dòng)支付，感到好奇，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)郵件解釋。

假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom聽(tīng)說(shuō)中國(guó)通過(guò)掃描二維碼就可以輕松實(shí)現(xiàn)移動(dòng)支付，感到好奇，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)郵件解釋。分析可知，應(yīng)該以第一人稱為主，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，要求考生根據(jù)提綱自己發(fā)揮拓展，考生要先想好寫(xiě)哪幾點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。