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18．現(xiàn)在同學(xué)們的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)越來越重，最近你班就"高二學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該減少體育活動(dòng)"的話題展開討論．下表是討論的具體內(nèi)容和雙方的觀點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所提供的信息寫篇作文介紹討論的情況并闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)．

	大多數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為	少數(shù)同學(xué)認(rèn)為
觀 點(diǎn)	不應(yīng)該減少	應(yīng)該減少
理 由	1、參加體育活動(dòng)可以調(diào)節(jié)身心、減輕壓力． 2、學(xué)習(xí)固然重要，但身體健康是前提．	1、高二學(xué)生時(shí)間有限，應(yīng)該把主要精力放在學(xué)習(xí)上． 2、過多的體育活動(dòng)會(huì)使學(xué)生疲憊不堪，不利于學(xué)習(xí)．

注意：1、詞數(shù)120左右      2、參考詞匯：relax使…放松； refresh使…恢復(fù)精力；relieve減輕．
One possible version：
We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior2students should cut down the time for sports．Opinions are divided．
                         

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息就"高二學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該減少體育活動(dòng)"的話題展開討論．下表是討論的具體內(nèi)容和雙方的觀點(diǎn)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)表中所提供的信息寫篇作文介紹討論的情況并闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：The majority of大多數(shù)；In the meanwhile同時(shí)；In addition另外；However然而；On the other hand另一方面，Personally就個(gè)人而言；
The majority of the students think that we shouldn't cut down the time for sports．（高分句型一）
However，some other students think that the time for sports should be cut down，because the time for their study is too limited．（高分句型二）
Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well．（高分句型三）

解答 We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior2 students should cut down the time for sports．Opinions are divided．
      The majority of the students think that we shouldn't cut down the time for sports．（高分句型一）Sports are a good way for us to relax and refresh ourselves．In the meanwhile，they think sports can reliever all kinds of pressure．In addition，good health is the first thing，though study is very important．No good health，no study．
      However，some other students think that the time for sports should be cut down，because the time for their study is too limited．（高分句型二）In their opinion，every minute should be made good use of to improve their lessons．On the other hand，more sports will make some students tired，which will affect their study．
      Personally，I think we should concentrate most of our energies on study and take exercise at the same time．Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well．（高分句型三）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．