Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\） 劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Tom,
I am delighted that you have passed the exam successful. What you have gained are the result of your hard work. How time flies! It’s two years before you came to study Chinese in Beijing. In the passed two years, you have helped us a lot, without that we couldn’t have made great progress in English.
Before you leave, many classmate and I intend to hold a farewell party for you, hope that you can remember the wonderful time we spent together. By the way, the party will be held on this Saturday evening in my house. We can take the No.1 bus at the hotel gate and get off bus at the Booking Building. I will be there meeting you.
We’re looking forward to your coming.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【小題1】successful ---- successfully
【小題2】are ---- is
【小題3】before---- since
【小題4】passed --- past
【小題5】that --- which
【小題6】classmate --- classmates
【小題7】hope--- hoping
【小題8】去掉on
【小題9】we----you 
【小題10】bus前面加the

解析試題分析：
【小題1】用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞。
【小題2】從句作主語，謂語動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)。
【小題3】句意：自從你來北京學(xué)習(xí)漢語，已經(jīng)有兩年時(shí)間了。所以before---- since。
【小題4】表示在過去的兩年，你幫了我們很多。所以passed --- past。
【小題5】這里含有一個(gè)介詞+關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句，指物，只能用which。
【小題6】many修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，所以classmate --- classmates。
【小題7】“許多同學(xué)和我”與“希望”之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞。
【小題8】這周六晚上，直接說this Saturday evening，所以去掉on。
【小題9】句意：你可以在賓館門口乘一路汽車。所以we----you。
【小題10】特指這輛汽車。所以bus前面加the。
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)