Question

假如你是你校的校園電視臺的小記者。下面是你最近對你校100名高一學(xué)生早餐情況的一份調(diào)查表。請根據(jù)這份調(diào)查表所提供的情況寫一篇100字左右的短文，并呼吁同學(xué)們認(rèn)真對待早餐，說明不吃早餐會對身體帶來不利的影響。
文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，請接著寫。
參考詞匯： treat…seriously認(rèn)真對待…； nutrition  n.營養(yǎng)；
nutritious adj. 營養(yǎng)的；     appetite 食欲，胃口

不吃早餐	隨便吃一點(diǎn)	吃得夠量并且講究營養(yǎng)
35%	45%	20%
原因：1. 起床較遲，來不及吃早餐；2. 沒有胃口，不想吃； 3. 父母忙，不能給孩子準(zhǔn)備早餐。

 
Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of
senior one in our school _________________________________
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Answer 1

Recently I’ve made an investigation among 100 students of senior one in our school. About 35 percent students go to school without breakfast while 45 percent students do not treat breakfast seriously. Only 20 percent students have enough breakfast with enough nutrition every morning.
The reason lies in the following facts. Some students don’t get up early and can’t spare any time for breakfast. Some don’t have a good appetite and don’t feel like eating anything. Besides, some parents are so busy that they don’t have enough time to prepare breakfast for their children.
I hold the belief that it won’t do good for us students to go without breakfast. It’s not good for our health. Therefore, we should have enough nutritious food for our breakfast.                               

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文，要點(diǎn)和開頭已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。要看清題目要求，短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯；可以適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于話題類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。同時要注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)，120 ～150，切不可少于120字，同時也不要寫得過于冗長，適度即可。