Question

3．假定你是李華．你在校英文報(bào)上看到了一則招聘啟事．
A Research Assistant Wanted
Our university in the countryside is looking for a research assistant．Candidates must have strong computing skills．Ideally suits a graduate from computing fields．
Contact Albert Lee at Lee@Yahoo．com for application or for more information．
請(qǐng)閱讀啟事并寫一封應(yīng)征郵件．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1）陳述應(yīng)征原因；
2）說明應(yīng)征相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；
3）被聘用后的決心．
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好．
Dear Ms Lee，
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduatedfrom high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你在校英文報(bào)上看到了一則招聘啟事，閱讀啟事并寫一封應(yīng)征郵件，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：1）陳述應(yīng)征原因；2）說明應(yīng)征相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn)；3）被聘用后的決心．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：in need of急需；apply for申請(qǐng)；graduate from從…畢業(yè)；be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；used to do過去常常；Besides另外；take part in 參加；take the first place 取得第一名；Thus因此；devote oneself to致力于；
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）
I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）
Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Ms Lee，
      I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
      I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduated from high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
      Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
      I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．