Question

假如你是美國的Mike，你的朋友李華打算到國外留學(xué)，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞。請你根據(jù)下列要點給對方寫一封回信：
1.語言是道硬門檻; 2.適應(yīng)能力很重要; 3.興趣愛好被看重; 4.要有社會責(zé)任感.
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭和結(jié)束語已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：適應(yīng) adapt to
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Answer 1

I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter. Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.
As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course. Besides , you should have the ability to adapt quickly to the new environment. What’s more, your interest is valued as well, for it has a lot to do with success. Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.
This is some of my advice, and I hope it can be of some help to you. May you succeed! Best wishes and good luck.                                        Yours
Mike

解析試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文。假如你是美國的Mike，你的朋友李華打算到國外留學(xué)，他寫信詢問你什么樣的中國學(xué)生最受國外高校青睞。請你根據(jù)下列要點給對方寫一封回信：1.語言是道硬門檻; 2.適應(yīng)能力很重要; 3.興趣愛好被看重; 4.要有社會責(zé)任感.
需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】I’m glad to hear that you want to study abroad in your letter.包含一個賓語從句；Here is what I know about what kind of Chinese students are favored in foreign colleges and universities.包含了一個表語從句和一個賓語從句；As far as I know, the language ability is essential, which helps you communicate with others and makes it easier for you to understand the course.包含一個非限制性定語從句；Last but not least, those who are willing to shoulder social responsibility are especially respected and welcomed.包含一個定語從句。
考點：書信類書面表達(dá)