Question

目前，不少人在寫(xiě)作文或交流時(shí)喜歡使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言。就此現(xiàn)象，你班最近舉行了一場(chǎng)討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表的提示，客觀地介紹討論的情況及你的觀點(diǎn)。

40%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	60%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為	你的觀點(diǎn)
1．有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無(wú)法理解 2．違背了漢語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)毫無(wú)幫助	1．幽默，使語(yǔ)言更生動(dòng) 2．有助于表達(dá)思想	1… 2. …

荒誕ridiculous
注意： 
1. 對(duì)所給提示，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there came a kind of language called Web Language.
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Answer 1

One possible version
Nowadays, with the development of the Internet, there has come a kind of language called Web Language. Recently, our class has held a discussion on whether it’s good for students to use Web Language in writing compositions or communication.
40% of the students are not in favor of the idea of using Web Language, thinking it ridiculous to see or hear words which are not commonly used in our daily life. Worse still, it’s hard for them to make themselves understood. In their opinion, it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.
However, the rest of the students are fond of it. They think what they say will sound humorous, which makes the language more lively. Moreover, it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.
In my opinion, it is a phenomenon worth thinking about. I don’t think it good to use Web Language. It may be fashionable as some think, but you may also make your idea confusing, leaving other people at a loss.

解析試題分析：本文屬于議論文的題材，采用“三段式”文體。首先對(duì)本班就有關(guān)是否使用網(wǎng)絡(luò)語(yǔ)言進(jìn)行討論的情況進(jìn)行總體說(shuō)明。然后對(duì)40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為是不好的，有點(diǎn)荒誕，有時(shí)讓人無(wú)法理解it ridiculous to see or hear words，it’s hard for them to make themselves understood.同時(shí)違背了漢語(yǔ)的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則，對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)毫無(wú)幫助it is against Chinese grammar, and it’s not beneficial to students’ studies.然后對(duì)其余的學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述，幽默，使語(yǔ)言更生動(dòng)They think what they say will sound humorous，有助于表達(dá)思想it is of special help for them to express themselves freely.最后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，可以就自己反對(duì)或是支持的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于作文的寫(xiě)作，特別是議論文發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)的文章是很好寫(xiě)的一種文體。我們平時(shí)所積累的東西，要在寫(xiě)作之前就回想，要將自己記得好的句型句式運(yùn)用到自己的作文中，這樣文章才能有東西可寫(xiě)，才能表達(dá)有深度，比如寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中多用定語(yǔ)從句，多用起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞，多用倒裝、虛擬語(yǔ)氣等，這些都要求學(xué)生平時(shí)積累好句式，在具體的寫(xiě)作中，只要句式正確，才適當(dāng)增加具體的單詞，這樣才能以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變。