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5．某公司為滿(mǎn)足社會(huì)需求，推出了家用機(jī)器人幫助上班一族料理家務(wù)，假設(shè)你是該公司的一名員工，將在新聞發(fā)布會(huì)上向大家介紹這一新型產(chǎn)品，機(jī)器人的主要功能
1：做家務(wù)，在特定的時(shí)間做飯，做飯時(shí)間能夠調(diào)整．
2：陪老人聊天，下棋，做運(yùn)動(dòng)等．
3：及時(shí)處理突發(fā)事件（emergency緊急狀況）例如撥打急救電話(huà)（ambulance call） 等詞數(shù)120左右，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
Hello，everyone!Now I'd like to introduce the robot to you．         ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，根據(jù)提示信息針對(duì)家用機(jī)器人幫忙料理家務(wù)這一話(huà)題開(kāi)展討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：做家務(wù)，在特定的時(shí)間做飯，做飯時(shí)間能夠調(diào)整．陪老人聊天，下棋，做運(yùn)動(dòng)等．及時(shí)處理突發(fā)事件（emergency緊急狀況）例如撥打急救電話(huà)（ambulance call）幾個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話(huà)題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be designed for 專(zhuān)為…而設(shè)計(jì)；do housework 做家務(wù)；besides  另外；play chess  下象棋；in case of 以防，萬(wàn)一；without delay毫不耽擱
It is designed for working people and can offer much convenience in daily life．（高分句型一）
While you are away，it can become good friends for old people．（高分句型二）
The most surprising，I think，is that in case of emergency，the robot can immediately dial the ambulance call and the first help can be received without delay．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everyone!Now I'd like to introduce the robot to you．It is designed for working people and can offer much convenience in daily life．（高分句型一）
    One of the advantages is that it can do housework．Does it sound unimaginable？It can cook dinner at setting-up time．Of course，the time can be changed as you like．Besides，the new robot can"speak"．While you are away，it can become good friends for old people．（高分句型二）  For example，if they feel lonely，he can have a chat，play chess and even do exercise with them actively．This advantage can relieve your worrying about leaving them alone．
    The most surprising，I think，is that in case of emergency，the robot can immediately dial the ambulance call and the first help can be received without delay．（高分句型三）
    Such is the new robot，a super advanced，useful and greatly helpful machine．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧．