Question

7．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津，你校擬向美國友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈(zèng)一批圖書．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯(lián)系，并告知將于今年七月赴對(duì)方學(xué)校參加夏令營時(shí)帶去贈(zèng)書．
（1）自我介紹；
（2）擬捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等
（3）詢問對(duì)方的其他要求
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；
（2）請(qǐng)適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫．
參考詞匯：
學(xué)生會(huì) the student union
Dear Chris，
I am Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School，the sister school of your school in Tianjin．
                                                            
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封關(guān)于交代向美國學(xué)校捐贈(zèng)圖書事宜的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般將來時(shí)為主．內(nèi)容包括：一自我介紹；二擬捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等；三詢問對(duì)方的其他要求．
高分句型：
1．It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture．句子里that 引導(dǎo)the news 的同位語從句，解釋the news 的內(nèi)容；is planning 是進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)表示將來．
我非常高興的告訴你，為了幫助你們中文班的學(xué)生能夠更好的了解中國的文化和傳統(tǒng)，我們學(xué)校計(jì)劃向你們捐贈(zèng)一批圖書．
2．The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July．句子里will be brought 是一般將來時(shí)態(tài)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)．
我們將于今年七月去你們學(xué)校參加夏令營時(shí)帶去300本書．

解答 Dear Chris，
     I am Li Jin，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School，the sister school of your school in Tianjin．（自我介紹）
     It is my pleasure to tell you the news that our school is planning a book donation in order to help the students of the Chinese Class in your school get a better understanding of the Chinese language and our traditional culture．【高分句型一】We will prepare books of many different kinds，such as poetry，fiction，and so on．The 300 books will be brought to your school when we arrive in America for the summer camp this July．【高分句型二】（擬捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等）
     As monitor of the Chinese Class，what other sorts of books do you think will be needed？（詢問對(duì)方的其他要求）
     I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Jin

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類作文．
寫作完成后．我們要通讀全文，檢查內(nèi)容是否符合要求，要點(diǎn)是否齊全，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否合乎要求．最主要的是要檢查句子是否符合英語習(xí)慣，句型是否正確，語法是否正確（包括句子結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致等），檢查單詞是否誤寫、少寫，習(xí)語搭配是否得當(dāng)?shù)�，以及字母大小寫、�?biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是否正確等，這就要求考生在定稿認(rèn)真檢查，仔細(xì)核對(duì)，及時(shí)發(fā)現(xiàn)并改正問題，保證要點(diǎn)齊全，句子完整通順，力爭減少失誤．