Question

最近，李越被評(píng)為你們班的“每周之星”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)她的事跡(在上周六下午，不顧天氣炎熱，為班級(jí)選購(gòu)歌詠比賽服裝)，用英語為班級(jí)板報(bào)寫一篇l00一120個(gè)詞的短文。你的文章應(yīng)包括下列要點(diǎn)：

1．李越的事跡及其對(duì)同學(xué)的影響；        2．你的評(píng)論。

注意：1．文章的標(biāo)題和開頭已給出(不計(jì)詞數(shù))。

2．參考詞匯： singing contest 歌詠比賽

Costume  服裝

Star Student of the Week

Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class.________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Star Student of the Week

Li Yue has been awarded the title of "Star Student of the Week" for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest. While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes. Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest.

Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others. She has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from her.

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇半開放性的作文，是關(guān)于每周之星的事跡的。主要的要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出了，1．李越的事跡及其對(duì)同學(xué)的影響； 2．你的評(píng)論。但細(xì)節(jié)方面需要考生做適當(dāng)?shù)难a(bǔ)充。在寫作的時(shí)候，要注意使用合適的連接詞，讓文章更有條理更流暢。同時(shí)也要使用高級(jí)的詞匯和高級(jí)的句型，讓文章更有檔次，更有層次。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開放性作文的寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文的難度較大，要求考生自己根據(jù)文章內(nèi)容梳理要點(diǎn)，然后在整理成文，在寫作時(shí)要合理運(yùn)用連接詞和高級(jí)詞匯高級(jí)句型，讓文章更有層次。