Question

7．假如你叫李華，請根據(jù)下面提示以"My new school life"為題，給你的筆友Mike寫封信，介紹你的學校生活．要點如下：
1．校園環(huán)境和設施
2．老師
3．同學
4．感受
注意：詞數(shù)100左右 （開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Mike，
Let me tell you something about my new school life．
                                                                         
Look forward to hearing from you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請根據(jù)下面提示以"My new school life"為題，給你的筆友Mike寫封信，介紹你的學校生活，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：校園環(huán)境和設施；老師；同學；感受 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：a huge garden大花園；live in居住，生活；make great progress取得巨大進步；make new friends交新朋友；full of challenges充滿了挑戰(zhàn)；a bright future美好的未來；keep fit保持健康；
There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere．（高分句型一）
 The school is not so large，but the teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me．（高分句型二）
Of course，I'll also do more exercise to keep fit．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mike，
      Let me tell you something about my new school life． My new school is as beautiful as a huge garden．There're green trees and grass and colorful flowers everywhere．（高分句型一）My new school has a big cafeteria，a place for us to have meals．There are residence halls for students to live in．The school is not so large，but the teachers are all kind and I believe I'll make great progress with them teaching me．（高分句型二）My classmates are very friendly and I've made many new friends here．I feel that my new life is very exciting，but I also realize that it is full of challenges．I've decided to work hard so that I'll have a bright future．Of course，I'll also do more exercise to keep fit．（高分句型三）
      Look forward to hearing from you．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．