Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你是中學生李華，你校外教 Mary 女士近期準備回英國度假，為此，你班同學準備開一個晚會為她送行。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一封 e-mail，通知她相關情況。

1：對她的辛勤教學工作表示感謝。

2. 晚會本周日晚上 7：30 開始，預計持續(xù) 1 個小時。

3. 地點：高三 10 班教室

4. 活動：同學們一起唱英文歌，班長代表全班贈送她鮮花和親手制作的禮物。

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右。2. 開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mary,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mary,

We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absence!

Firstly, I’d like to express our gratitude for your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we’ve decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. The party will start at 7:30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10, Grade III and will probably last about an hour. All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.

We wish you a plain journey back home! We are also expecting you to come back to China

【解析】

試題分析：

本文要求寫一封電子郵件給外教 Mary 老師，對她的辛勤教學工作表示感謝，并告訴他你班同學聽說她要回英國度假，準備開一個晚會為她送行，最后告訴她晚會時間地點和活動。寫作時注意以下幾點：1.涵蓋所有內(nèi)容。2、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時，用第一人稱。3、注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。：

【亮點說明】

文章使用了非常好的短語和句子給文章增色，如 非限制性定語從句At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, which are mostly made by ourselves.；賓語從句We hear that you’ll return to the United Kingdom on a holiday soon.；All of the class hope that you can come to join us singing some English songs ；祝你一路順風We wish you a plain journey back home! ；重點短語have a good time。