Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同學(xué)寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

There’s an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old．This can’t be proved though he doesn’t have a birth certificate．All his personal papers were destroy during the World War Ⅱ. I don’t know if he really is so old, and it doesn’t matter．He certainly looks very old．Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life．Old Joe always answered them like this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】calling → called

【2】who和said 之間加is

【3】though → because

【4】destroy → destroyed

【5】World War Ⅱ前的the

【6】and → but

【7】question → questions

【8】answered → answers

【9】his → your

【10】foolishly → foolish

【解析】

試題分析：通過閱讀并修改此短文，考查學(xué)生對(duì)固定搭配，動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)，名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)問題，以及復(fù)合賓語的辨別和運(yùn)用。

【1】calling → called 考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。called被稱作，表被動(dòng)，一個(gè)老人被叫做老周。

【2】who和said 之間加is 考查謂語動(dòng)詞。 who said to be 110 years old應(yīng)該是定語從句，所以加is和said to 意思是：據(jù)說。

【3】though → because 考查連詞。句意：他有110歲了這件事得不到證明因?yàn)樗麤]有身份證。所以用because 表原因。

【4】destroy → destroyed考查謂語動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)形式。句意：他所有的個(gè)人資料都被毀了。這里是被動(dòng)用過去分詞destroyed和were構(gòu)成一般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)。

【5】去掉World War Ⅱ前的the 考查固定搭配。第二次世界大戰(zhàn)說成：World War Ⅱ或者the Second World War。

【6】and → but 考查句子之間的關(guān)系。句意：我不知道他是否真得很老了，但是這沒關(guān)系。所以用but表轉(zhuǎn)折。

【7】question → questions 考查名詞。question 是可數(shù)名詞，指很多問題用復(fù)數(shù)形式questions。

【8】answered → answers 考查謂語動(dòng)詞。主語是Old Joe相當(dāng)于he, 一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)謂語動(dòng)詞用單三形式，所以用answers。

【9】his → your 考查代詞。lose one’s temper 發(fā)脾氣，主語是you，所以代詞用your你的。

【10】foolishly → foolish 考查形容詞。用形容詞foolish修飾名詞questions，副詞不修飾名詞。