Question

13．假設(shè)你正在參加全省中學(xué)生英語演講比賽，請你針對很多同學(xué)計劃在即將到來的暑假做志愿活動這一現(xiàn)象．寫一篇演講稿，號召更多的同學(xué)參與其中．
演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．志愿活動的意義（對本人、受助對象、社會）；
2．如何做志愿活動（助老助殘、公益宣傳等）；
注意：
1．詞數(shù)120一150字左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好．不計人總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，boys and girls．
In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people，especially among youngsters．      ．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一篇演講稿，號召更多的同學(xué)參與志愿活動，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般將來時，內(nèi)容要點包括：志愿活動的意義（對本人、受助對象、社會）；如何做志愿活動（助老助殘、公益宣傳等）；我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為志愿活動的意義（對本人、受助對象、社會）．第二部分為如何做志愿活動（助老助殘、公益宣傳等）．
重點短語與句型：
offer us an excellent chance 提供我們一個好的機會
deal with 處理
learn to be independent學(xué)會獨立
take part in  參加
It is my great pleasure to meet everyone of you here today 此句用了it作形式主語
And I want to advocate more people to take part in this meaningful activity which will be a very precious lesson for us in the future．
此句which引導(dǎo)的定語從句，修飾先行詞this meaningful activity
After all，being a volunteer will offer us an excellent chance to get to know many friends from different places all over the world此句用了動名詞作主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)．

解答 Hello everyone，it's my great pleasure to meet everyone of you here today．I'd like to talk something about being a volunteer during the summer vacation as I have noticed that many of you are quite interested in such activities and I am very happy to see that．Being a volunteer is beneficial for both us and those who need help．And I want to advocate more people to take part in this meaningful activity which will be a very precious lesson for us in the future．Besides，we will help a lot of people who need our help．志愿活動的意義（對本人、受助對象、社會）．
After all，being a volunteer will offer us an excellent chance to get to know many friends from different places all over the world and we can learn a lot of things during the process of being a volunteer，such as managing our own stuff，learning to be independent as well as dealing with the difficult situations that might happen． 如何做志愿活動（助老助殘、公益宣傳等）
Thank you!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．