Question

9．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二（1）班的學(xué)生李華，你的英國筆友Chris剛剛轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)，感到一切都很陌生．他在郵件中向你詢問如何盡快融入新環(huán)境．請你根據(jù)以下信息回信．
1．多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；
2．積極參加學(xué)�；顒樱�
3．向老師尋求幫助．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封提綱類書信．感根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱來敘述，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主．內(nèi)容主要包括：一 點明寫信的目的；二提出建議，包括多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；積極參加學(xué)�；顒�；向老師尋求幫助．三表達(dá)意愿．
高分句型：
1．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．句子里it做形式主語，代指to take part in more activities；which引導(dǎo)定語從句，先行詞是 activities．
第二，多參加活動對你來說是個好主意，這些活動包括和其他同學(xué)的合作和交流，因此對于發(fā)展友好關(guān)系有好處．
2．Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．句子里，faced with 做狀語，和主語you之間是被動關(guān)系；who引導(dǎo)定語從句，代指先行詞your teachers．
最后，面對難題，你可以向你的老師請教，他們通常能夠給你提出一些合理化的建議，

解答 Dear Chris，
      I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school．Such problems are quite normal．Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful to you．（點明寫信的目的）
      First，I think you may need to communicate with your classmates as much as possible．In this way，you will get to know each other better．Second，it might be a good idea for you to take part in more activities，which usually involve teamwork and interactions with other students and are therefore good for developing friendly relationships．【高分句型一】Lastly，faced with some tough problems，you might consider asking your teachers，who can usually offer you some sensible suggestions．【高分句型二】（提出建議，包括多跟同學(xué)交流溝通；積極參加學(xué)�；顒樱幌蚶蠋煂で髱椭�．）
      I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you．If there is anything more I can do to help，please let me know．（表達(dá)意愿）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．