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短文改錯。
     假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。文章共有10處語言
錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A)，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯誤及修改詞均僅限一詞； 
          2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。

Dear Editor,
     I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food
buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one
of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to
a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death. 
     As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care
about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged with law.
Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together
to make sure food is safe. 
                                                                                                                                         Yours, 
                                                                                                                                        Wang Ming
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Answer 1

Dear Editor, 
     I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food
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buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale. Fortunately, one
2. bought                                                                                                3. turned
of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an ambulance, which carried them quickly to
                                                                            4. 去掉on
a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death.
     As some illegal businessmen∧only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care
                                            5. are                                                                          6. they
about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged with law.
                                                              7. what                                                                  8. by
Meanwhile, I do hope∧whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together
                          9. the / our                              10. importance
to make sure food is safe.
                                                                                                                                           Yours,
                                                                                                                                           Wang Ming