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6．你班將召開一次主題班會，探討高中生在成長過程中遇到的煩惱．請根據(jù)自己實(shí)際生活中遇到的學(xué)習(xí)、交友、代溝、同齡人攀比等現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行思考，寫一篇發(fā)言稿．文章需包括：
1．你在實(shí)際生活中遇到的至少兩種煩惱及其簡要介紹；
2．你應(yīng)對這些煩惱所采取的舉措和建議．
Boys and girs，
We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（說明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!
That's all．Thank you．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
It is one's inner beauty that matters．一個人的內(nèi)在美是最重要的．
高分句型二：
Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．
面對這些，我們能找到一個合適的時機(jī)和他們進(jìn)行心靈的溝通，盡量的消除誤會．
句型一 該句是一個強(qiáng)調(diào)句，被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分為句子的主語．原句為：one's inner beauty matters．
句型二 ①Facing this，此處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，表主動
           ②trying to remove the misunderstanding．此處使用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語

解答 Boys and girs，
    We high school students do have some growing pains but we can get rid of them correctly and wisely．First，some of us are upset about their figures and looks．It's unnecessary and it's not impoatant at all．We needn't care about it．It is one's inner beauty that matters．（高分句型）Second，we sometimes seem to be misunderstood by our teachers，parents and classmates．Facing this，we can find a proper time to have a heart to heart talk with them，trying to remove the misunderstanding．（高分句型）Some of us have fewer friends．I think being openminded and friendly will do us good．Third，we work efficiently，full of determination．Last，some of us don't have  much pocket money，so they feel unhappy．（說明原因）Isn't it strange？So long as we have some，that's enough．And we can learn to earn money!
    That's all．Thank you．

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