Question

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友Tom不善于交際，來(lái)信總是向你訴說(shuō)他在交往方面的煩惱，請(qǐng)你就此向你的朋友提出一些提議。建議內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
1.         寬容（tolerant）
2.         多微笑
3.         和別人在一起時(shí)，不要保持沉默
[寫(xiě)作要求]
1.          只能使用五個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容
2.          開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已給出不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫
Dear Tom,
You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.
                                                                               
                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
You often tell me about your difficulty in making friends and communicating with others. Here are my suggestions and I hope they can help.
First of all, try to be tolerant, because everyone has his or her own personalities, some of which May annoy you, but you should realize everyone is different and that your personality may also annoy others. If you think a person is so difficult to get along with, it may be just because he deals with something in a way different from yours. Secondly, smile as much as possible, which is an effective way to fill the gaps between people and is sure to bring you a lot of friends. Rather than keep silent when you are with someone, try to start a relaxing conversation with a topic that everybody has something to talk about.ks5u
Above all, being active and outgoing can help you to do better in communication.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。