Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)文體委員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面圖表，用英語(yǔ)寫一則關(guān)于春游的通知。

參加者	活動(dòng)內(nèi)容	集合時(shí)間及地點(diǎn)	注意事項(xiàng)
高中一、二年級(jí)的學(xué)生	1. 去博物館看人與自然的展覽； 2. 參觀泉山植物園.	1. 4月25日上午乘校車前往。早晨7點(diǎn)集合，7：20開車； 2. 學(xué)校大門前。	1. 參觀展覽時(shí)保持安靜；并認(rèn)真記筆記，準(zhǔn)備回來后討論； 2. 在山頂野餐，要自帶午餐和欣水； 3. 參加者在本周四前到學(xué)生會(huì)報(bào)名。

 

Answer 1

Notice
The students of Senior Grade One and Grade Two go out for a visit on April 25. We’ll first go to the museum to see an exhibition on Human and Nature. When you’re in the exhibition hall you should keep silent and make careful notes because we’re going to have a discussion after we come back. After that we plan to visit the botanical garden on the Quanshan Hill and have a picnic on the top of it. So please bring lunch and some drinking water with you.
Our school bus will take us there. The school bus will leave at 7:20. Please gather at our school gate at 7:00 am.
Those who want to take part in the activity should enter your names at the Students’ Union before Thursday.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。