Question

16．假如你是李華，你校將舉辦中學(xué)生文化藝術(shù)節(jié)，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫信，邀請(qǐng)他參加這次藝術(shù)節(jié)并請(qǐng)他表演一個(gè)節(jié)目．信的內(nèi)容包括：
1．演出地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間及參加人員；
2．介紹藝術(shù)節(jié)主題：弘揚(yáng)傳統(tǒng)文化，促進(jìn)文化交流．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：中學(xué)生文化藝術(shù)節(jié)the Middle School Art Festival
承辦 host     弘揚(yáng) carry forward
Dear Peter，
How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，你校將舉辦中學(xué)生文化藝術(shù)節(jié)，請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫信，邀請(qǐng)他參加這次藝術(shù)節(jié)并請(qǐng)他表演一個(gè)節(jié)目，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：演出地點(diǎn)、時(shí)間及參加人員；介紹藝術(shù)節(jié)主題：弘揚(yáng)傳統(tǒng)文化，促進(jìn)文化交流．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：appeal to吸引；promote cultural exchange促進(jìn)文化交流；take part in參加；By the way順便說(shuō)一下；satisfy our curiosity滿足我們的好奇心
I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）
And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二）
By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       How is everything going？I'm honored and happy，hearing you are a fan of traditional Chinese Art and Culture．（高分句型一）Here comes a piece of good news appealing to you．The Middle School Art Festival hosted by our school is drawing near．
       The festival is to carry forward traditional culture and promote cultural exchange．And it provides audience with a stage where they can sample different forms of traditional Chinese and foreign culture while putting on performance．（高分句型二） Next Friday，on the 30th of June，the festival will be held in the Shiyu Building．All of us students will take part in it．I sincerely hope that you can join us in our performance．By the way，it will be nicer of you to show us something from your country，since it will satisfy our curiosity about Britain．（高分句型三）
       All of us will feel graced with the presence of you and your family．
                                                                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．