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新學(xué)期開學(xué)了，同學(xué)們在選擇“租房獨住”還是“住學(xué)校宿舍”這個問題上很糾結(jié)，一些同學(xué)認為租房獨住可以更自由地安排自己的生活和學(xué)習(xí)，……；另外一些同學(xué)認為集體生活更利于成長，……。請你寫一篇不少于120字的短文，介紹這一情況并發(fā)表你自己的看法。

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Living alone or Living with Roommates

At the beginning of the new term, there appears a heated discussion among us as to whether we should live off campus or live together with other roommates in the students’ dormitory . Opinions vary from person to person.

 

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Those who are in favour of living alone hold the view that it is very convenient to live by themselves. They can enjoy absolute freedom in a room of their own. They can have their own timetable without disturbing others. But others argue that living with roommates has attrations of their own. With several students sharing the same room, each person’s experiences can be greatly enriched.They can learn a lot from talking to each other. Moreover, by learning to tolerate the differences between individuals, they can become more mature.

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer to live with roommates because I love the sense of belonging. Besides, living on campus can help me save a great deal of time on the way between my home and school, which means that I can concentrate more time and energy on my studies.

【解析】：本文是對兩種住宿的不同選擇的討論，審題時應(yīng)該注意使用現(xiàn)在時來陳述觀點。同時這也是一篇半開放性的作為，要點主要還是有學(xué)生自己來梳理，贊成租房的同學(xué)可以從生活更自由，學(xué)習(xí)更靈活著手；贊成住宿舍的同學(xué)可以從集體生活的優(yōu)點入手。在寫作時注意使用合適的連接詞如：As far as I’m concerned，but等；也要使用高級的句型和詞匯，讓文章更流暢更有條理更有文采。